Posts by Charles Holdefer

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The Coast of Everything by Guillermo Stitch

The appeal of risk-averse storytelling is undeniable. “Cozy” refers to more than a subgenre of mystery writing: it can reflect a more general attitude, a reading posture that prizes the familiar, the safe, the fashionable. In effect, cheering for a team. A team can take many shapes: for instance, as fans of a particular genre, or as tenured specialists with a career to grind. Or as hipper-than-thou media opinionators who lay down the law for the rest of us. These line-ups are diverse, but they all share, despite their differences, a common suspicion of stories that upset expectations.

We could all do with a bit of soothing, I suppose, but we can also imagine other ways to play the game. Truly memorable books aspire to be more than non-allergenic toys. “Safety first” is not a precept for ambitious literature. Guillermo Stitch’s The Coast of Everything (Sagging Meniscus, 750 pages) can be described as a novel that is eager to push past guardrails. This is not the work of a team player, unless one imagines an altogether different kind of contest allowing an individual to play simultaneously on different, or even opposing, sides.

With a startling array of characters, settings and styles, the novel pays homage to Scheherazade of One Thousand and One Nights. It spins out tales of Germanic mountain villagers, of the North African underworld, and predatory media moguls of the future. There is Chandleresque noir and Pynchonian paranoia and in one section, a cameo appearance by Charles Dickens, who contributes a dystopian sci-fi tale about a mysterious island, recounted in high Victorian style. Five central stories bleed into each other, with various subplots. And these pages also contain recipes.

For a reviewer, it’s hard to summarize, much less to label these goings-on, but one of the considerable merits of The Coast of Everything is that it leaves you pondering not only the book in question but the workings of literature in general. Formally speaking, it relies on a strategy of nested stories like Russian dolls, but having said as much, the novel’s chief interest doesn’t reside in its narrative athleticism. It engages on many other levels.

For instance, The Coast embodies a riposte against some of the didactic excesses of identity politics. In recent decades, many writers have asserted—rightly so—personal and community prerogatives to tell stories that were previously excluded from the canon. But at the same time, some writers—more debatably—have questioned the access of other authors to their imagined worlds. In her excellent essay, “Fascinated to Presume: In Defense of Fiction,” Zadie Smith pinpoints a problem: “The old—and never especially helpful—adage write what you know has morphed into something more like a threat: Stay in your lane.

Good advice for traffic safety, but for fiction? The risk here is of atomization, of didacticism and reducing the scope of literature. Smith continues:

“Do we know what fiction was? We think we know. In the process of turning from it, we’ve accused it of appropriation, colonization, delusion, vanity, naiveté, political and moral irresponsibility. We have found fiction wanting in myriad ways but rarely paused to wonder, or recall, what we once wanted from it—what theories of self-and-other it offered us, or why, for so long, those theories felt meaningful to so many. Embarrassed by the novel—and its mortifying habit of putting words into the mouths of others—many have moved swiftly on to what they perceive to be safer ground …”

In The Coast of Everything, Stitch is not embarrassed by the novel. He is constantly putting words into the mouths of others. He ventriloquizes different races, sexes and ethnicities, as well as class differences and historical registers of English. A major plot thread concerns Liam Téad, an Irish investigator who works in California but finds himself transported to Cairo, considering the life of a rich and perplexing woman:

“It was probably impossible to narrate a story like that, a story set in a world like that—a world populated by people who, if he was honest with himself, he resented from the off for their money, their power and their privilege—without rubbing Liam up the wrong way. Coming from the nose-against-the-window classes, he had carefully curated a set of values and attitudes that made the cold street seem somehow right and the cosy salon somehow wrong. Trustworthy people lived on his side of the glass. Why then, whenever there was a window to press his nose against, did he so dutifully press his nose against it? His progress through the world could be traced in a series of greasy nose prints. While his current associations were more salon than street, that was both precarious and illusory.”

You could say Liam’s character incarnates the tensions of the stay-in-your-lane attitude. Meanwhile, Stitch, the author, is off to the races. The narration that Liam judged “probably impossible” is elsewhere served up on the page in the woman’s voice. The novel is a polyphonic performance, reaching beyond the particular interest of individual characters or groups, to explore the nature of narrative itself.

Elsewhere, a long section of The Coast of Everything depicts a future in which utilitarian functionality is the pre-eminent value, and narrative is of interest only for its non-literary applications. In this imagined post-codex era, referred to as the “Second Enlightenment,” literature is worse than obsolete. It is considered dangerous, and texts from the “First Era” are ruthlessly purged. In a further embedded story, the uses of narrative as the driving force of consumerism is dramatized by the tales of the Zade family and their famous twin daughters:

“The Zade twins were a meme. Considered the embodiment of Zade duplicity. Their father’s media group was as essential to life in this country, and all the other countries, as it was despised and distrusted. What you thought of the Zade machine, though, was of no consequence. It owned the main news outlets and it owned the outlets the main news outlets called fake news outlets, which in turn and of course accused the main news outlets of being fake news, so nobody could be confident anymore about which was which, or why it mattered. And by one circuitous route or another, Zade owned it all. Zade was hardwired into your device. Into your car. If you could afford the right type of refrigerator, it was there too. And it owned social media. […] It probably didn’t own you, yet, but then you had been pretty much atomized. You weren’t worth owning. And it didn’t need to own you to sell you anyway. And somehow the twins embodied all of this.”

Working on such an enormous canvas will inevitably run counter to the expectations of readers who, in our digital era of reduced attention spans, assume that the novel should follow suit. To do otherwise can seem an act of hubris, maybe even a guy thing. (In which case, Donna Tartt and Lucy Ellmann, among others, didn’t get the memo.) In any case, The Coast of Everything rejects such circumscribed views. Though long and complicated, it remains accessible and reader-friendly, perhaps precisely because it feels unpoliced.

Since the author is Irish, and the book is uncommonly ambitious, the shadow of James Joyce looms large, but there are signal differences here. Ireland is mentioned only briefly in The Coast of Everything, whose stories favor other settings and continents. The Roman Catholic Church doesn’t really figure; and though the text is wide-ranging in its literary allusion, there is not the conspicuous performative erudition of Joyce. (George Orwell, even as he praised Ulysses, referred to its author as an “elephantine pedant.”) The author of The Coast of Everything avoids such displays. His style is not Joycean but rather throbs with its own imperative pulse, earning the right to be called Stitchian. This is a remarkable novel by a writer who does not play safe.

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Charles Holdefer’s next novel, Move the Mountain, will be published in April 2027.

 

Child of Light by Jesi Bender

What do we really know when epistemic parameters are fluid? This question is central to Jesi Bender’s historical novel, Child of Light (Whisky Tit, 318 pages), set in upstate New York at the end of the 19th century. It centers on Ambrétte Memenon, a clever and dutiful young woman whose father is a French scientist immersed in his studies of electricity, and whose mother is a Québécoise enthusiast of Spiritualism.  Papa seeks to illuminate cities at night, Maman to communicate with the dead.

These are rather different agendas, to put it mildly, but the story dramatizes how, within the context of the period, both pursuits are cutting edge. And Ambrétte, in an attempt to mend her broken family, tries to reconcile the two.

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Hope and Wild Panic by Sean Ennis

Some writers refuse to get in line with linearity, or take up common cause with causality. In Sean Ennis’s Hope and Wild Panic (Malarkey Books, 202 pages), the reader finds a depiction of life in the contemporary U.S. with recognizable settings and characters—realism, in a word—but it is also fundamentally destabilized, relying on non-chronological fragments (chapters? flash fictions?) of only one or two pages to explore the lives of a middle-aged narrator and his family. One section begins as follows:

“Rejoice with me, I have beaten psoriasis. There’s this trick I have of not watching the news. Most things don’t happen, and there’s been some debate internally about the order of events. I keep losing things and the obvious answer is that they’ve been stolen! But the investigation is finished—it is what it is. A black government helicopter is circling, and I’m just reading my big heavy book like that’s just a ceiling fan. Our neighbors behind the house, across the gulch, have been growing marijuana. I wonder what for. A family of foxes is our other neighbor. Is there some apophenia going on here? Doot-dee-doo.”

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What Did You Do Today? by Anthony Varallo

Fiction labeled magic realism is sometimes too squishy, to my taste, relying too much on novelty or hoped-for charm. Instead of providing an added charge to the storytelling, the other-worldly conceits can bring about a dilution, like a film that leans too heavily on special effects.

In What Did You Do Today? (UNT Press, 216 pages), winner of the Katherine Anne Porter Prize, Anthony Varallo avoids this pitfall across 45 stories that often defy realistic convention. He knows how to strike the right balance between the ordinary and the frankly impossible. Bizarre events occur against a backdrop of everyday domesticity, as parents and children go about their lives.

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Drift by Craig Rodgers

Sometimes a novel’s originality is less a matter of affirmation than an act of refusal. Refusal to go along with received ideas of how to tell a story or create verisimilitude or even how words signify. Saying no opens up new space, or at least points towards what has been neglected by complacence.

Craig Rodgers’ Drift (Death of Print, 156 pages) is such a novel. A dystopian tale of a bible salesman named Charlie, it will defy the ingrained expectations of many readers. Plotwise, Charlie has no trouble making a sale: everyone seems to want his product. He has no idea why. Women like Charlie—no struggles there, either. Other characters include a clown on a rampage and a mysterious goon in a dented bowler hat who seems to be following Charlie. There’s a bearded lady, with whom Charlie has sex, and a young boy afflicted by plague who becomes his travel companion. Then the boy steals Charlie’s car. Continue reading →

Three Days by the Sea by Helen E. Mundler

My initial response when I started to read Helen Mundler’s Three Days by the Sea (Holland House Books, 300 pages) was “Yes, we need more of this.” In addition to the interest of the story, the book serves as a reminder of the strengths of literary realism, at a time when for many readers, journalism and nonfiction have replaced the novel as a chronicle of lived experience.

This situation is the product of a changing culture but it’s also, I think, the fault of many novelists, who too often settle for what I’ve come to think of as “weather report realism.” In these novels, Plot X or Y occurs against a backdrop of dutiful descriptions of everyday life, a supposedly reliable accounting of facial expressions, brand names and what the weather was like that day.

Of course life is full of facial expressions and brand names and weather, but verisimilitude is not an end in itself. Saying as much is nothing new. Surely it’s what Willa Cather had in mind when she defended the novel démeublé. As a masterful realistic writer, she knew the risks of her chosen mode. An artist can faithfully render how life appears while neglecting how it feels. “How wonderful,” Cather observed, “it would be if we could throw all the furniture out of the window.” Continue reading →

In the Field by Rachel Pastan

Literary fiction about science remains an exception. When C.P. Snow voiced concern in 1959 about “Two Cultures” in reference to the growing gap between science and the arts, it created a stir. Nowadays, no one would debate the notion. It has hardened into fact.

Often, when literary fiction tries to engage with science, it tends toward speculative writing. For instance, Kazuo Ishiguro’s Never Let Me Go or Ian McEwan’s Solar or any of a number of Richard Powers’ novels. They show a hypothetical present or future and ask: “What if?Continue reading →

The Magpie’s Return by Curtis Smith

Timely literary fiction is uncommon. Stories deemed “topical” by major media outlets flicker at us as frantically as a strobe light. Literary fiction, in contrast, offers a slow burn. Lag times in the publishing industry exacerbate the situation. By the time a story ripped from the headlines reaches the reader, it can exude a whiff of old news, precisely because it’s been ripped from the headlines. Continue reading →

All the Useless Things Are Mine: A Book of Seventeens by Thomas Walton

WaltonFlash fiction has enjoyed a boom in recent years but sometimes overlooked are shorter prose forms which don’t respect the conventions of flash—e.g., at least an implied plot or hint of closure—in order seek out other literary effects. Thomas Walton’s All the Useless Things Are Mine: A Book of Seventeens (Sagging Meniscus, 138 pages) is an intriguing entry into this field. It is both experimental, in the sense that there isn’t really a label for the genre, and traditional, for it deploys aphorism and image in a manner which is readily accessible, despite its peculiarity.

The author calls the pieces in this collection “seventeens” because each freestanding entry is composed of exactly seventeen words. A few pieces are titled, but most are not, and the book is arranged in 26 chapters with titles like “Animal Sketches,” “Art Criticism” and “Birdsong.” The fixation on seventeen words recalls the haiku form, which in its English rendering is typically composed of seventeen syllables in three lines. Here, though, instead of relying on poetry techniques like line breaks or rhythm assisted by white space on the page, Walton opts for a “prosier” approach, working with short, punchy sentences. Continue reading →

This is How He Learned to Love by Randall Brown

Was it the intention of Randall Brown or his publisher to make a statement by putting the word “stories” on the cover of This Is How He Learned to Love (Sonder Press, 88 pages)? I don’t know. Of course, it’s a convention to tag book titles with explanatory genre labels such as “a novel” or “stories” or “a memoir.” But Brown is a particular case. He is a prolific and expert writer of flash fiction as well as the author of A Pocket Guide to Flash Fiction. He also writes longer forms (see his novella How Long is Forever), but it’s not unreasonable to think of him as “Mr. Flash,” one of the chief exponents of the form in America. Continue reading →